awee, thankyou sweetie:)!!
i'm sure they aren't,
hmm..i'm not sure what i could say?
they come straight from the heart.
you can't really say i'm goin to
write a poem and sit down and just
expect it too all come out. there has
to be the feeling behind it. i hope you
can feel the feeling behind mine, because
there is sooooo much of it i'm tryint to
show. okay heres my best shot as a tip:
find some place where your all by yourself,
its quite and no one can destirb you.
uhm, and just dont think about it too much,
let your thoughts and feelings go crazy and
take all control of you. most of the time i'm
cryin while i'm writing. just let you thoughts
flow out onto the paper. and never give up if
you can't think of anything..just relax and
clear your mind.
well, i hope that helps! its all i can muster up
at the time! ohh, and i added you btw.
Everyone! Read this poem i found my confuzeled:
SPEAR A TEAR :
whats wrong with you? will you never learn?
no matter what you do, you'll always crash and burn.
your in a race with fate, a race you'll never win.
and all you end up doing, is drowning in your sin.
dont you get it? your born to fail,
and as much as you try, fate just won't let you bail.
you yell our in silence, for on one to hear,
but you get the reply, not a whisper in your ear,
but the world yelling back, "why should i spear a tear?"